资源简介 第三讲 生活故事类(2025·浙江1月卷)Kevin was pretty bored．His mother was at work，and his father had been away on business．Therefore，he was left in the care of Mrs．Hill，an old lady who lived next door．His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy．He never got into trouble，though sometimes he wanted to do risky things．Mrs．Hill was asleep．Kevin sighed (叹息) and hoped something exciting would happen．Suddenly，a movement outside caught his eye．Mrs．Hill's front window faced Mr．and Mrs．Green's house across the street．The couple had both gone to work，so it was strange that someone was over there．Kevin stared at the man at their front door．Suddenly，the man jumped through an open window into the house．With his heart in his mouth，Kevin grabbed Mrs．Hill's home phone and called the police．Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted before the police arrived，Kevin decided to do something．He rushed out of Mrs．Hill's house and crossed the street quickly．Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree，he jumped in through the window．“Stop right there！You must leave right now！” he called out，holding the branch with both hands．The man froze for a second，but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief．“Hey，kid，put that down．It was my home．My parents used to live here and my father's watch was here，” he explained，trying to lift a floorboard．At that moment，the sounds of a police car echoed (回响) in the air．The man stood up in a panic，then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out．Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened．They pursued and arrested the man．Kevin went back to Mrs．Hill's house．Somehow he wasn't sure he had done the right thing．“What if he has told the truth？”he thought to himself．The man's words sounded pretty convincing．注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。When Mr．and Mrs．Green got home，Kevin went to talk to them．_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Kevin and Mr．Green took the watch they had found to the police station．_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、教你读文1．通过下表理清信息点Characters Kevin，Mrs．Hill，Mr．and Mrs．Green，the intruder(入侵者)，police officersWhen/Where During the day when Kevin was left in Mrs．Hill's care，at Mrs．Hill's and the Greens' houses．Conflict/ Problem Kevin noticed a stranger breaking into the Greens' house and had to decide whether to intervene(干预)，despite his uncertainty about the man's intentions．Main idea Kevin acted bravely to stop a potential burglary (入室盗窃) but later questioned his decision when the intruder claimed to have a legitimate (合情合理的) reason for being there．Theme Courage，moral dilemma，responsibility，and the complexity of judging others' actions．2．梳理“两情”线二、教你构思1．细读首句，巧妙构思2．捕捉伏笔，注重照应原文伏笔语言 续写部分衔接设置第二段the man jumped through an open window 续写通过“pried up the loose floorboard”重现案发现场细节第四段my father's watch was here 续写中“antique watch”和“initials ‘J．R．’”验证手表真实性第六段Somehow he wasn't sure he had done the right thing 续写“Kevin finally relaxed”完成心理转变的闭环第五段They pursued and arrested the man 续写“shaking Kevin's hand...solved a cold case”延伸案件结果第二段Mrs．Hill's front window faced Mr．and Mrs．Green's house 续写保持空间一致性，仍在Green家展开调查三、教你出彩When Mr．and Mrs．Green got home，Kevin went to talk to them．With a nervous voice (用介词短语作状语)，he explained what had happened and the man's claim about the watch．To his surprise (用介词短语作状语表达情感)，Mr．Green's face darkened．“That's impossible，” he said．“We've lived here for 20 years，and the previous owners moved overseas．There's no watch hidden here (用过去分词短语作后置定语)．” Mrs．Green added gently (用副词表达情感动作)，“But let's check the floorboard he mentioned，just to be sure．” Together，they pried up the loose floorboard near the window．Dust flew as (用as引导的时间状语从句表示两个动作同时发生) Kevin spotted a small metal box．Inside lay an antique watch．(用倒装句表示强调)Kevin and Mr．Green took the watch they had found to the police station．The officer examined it immediately，which was engraved with the initials “J．R．”(用定语从句丰富句式)—not the thief's father's name，but (用连词not...but...表示并列转折) a stolen heirloom from a burglary years ago! “This was reported missing in 2010，” he said，shaking Kevin's hand(用非谓语动词短语，表示动作同时发生)．“You've solved a cold case！” As they left (用as引导的时间状语从句)，Mr．Green smiled．“You didn't just stop a crime，Kevin—you uncovered the truth．” Kevin finally relaxed．Justice，he realized(使用插入语，突出强调前面的主语“Justice”)，wasn't just about bravery—it was about seeking answers．(一)(2025·河南郑州模拟)In 2017 I graduated from a medical school and started to train the seniors for recovery as a therapist in the Brookdale Lake Senior Living Center where I met Hoffner，who had lived there for roughly the past decade，for the first time．Hoffner，a lady of 104 years old now，grew up in Chicago and worked as a telephone operator for Bell Company for more than four decades．She never married or had children，but she enjoyed beach vacations and driving her small blue car touring all over the country．She loved sports and was kind to everyone she met．She watched every Chicago Cubs game on a TV in her room and also enjoyed watching “MASH” runs．She stayed active，walking several blocks to the grocery store multiple times a week and going on walks to have a look at the neighbor's dogs．She was known for carrying candies—Heath bars，Reese's Peanut Butter Cups and dark chocolate—in her walker．She shared her candies with everyone she met，but she always kept some for me．I remembered that afternoon I and one of my patients were figuring out when the meal was served when Hoffner invited us to eat supper with her in the dining area．Since then，we three ate dinner together almost every night and Hoffner started calling me grandson．One night two months ago，I carelessly told Hoffner over dinner that I was going skydiving in Ottawa．When Hoffner said she wanted to go，too，I thought she meant as an observer．“No，no，no，I want to jump out of a plane，” Hoffner said．My heart sank because I knew clearly what it meant to jump from an airplane at about 13，500 feet high．It might injure her．But she made up her mind and started to do everything to prepare for it．She went to the doctor to have a check and asked me to make a training plan．With her walker she kept training every day．注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。One day，I went to the dining hall and saw her sitting in a corner，sad and alone．______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“Jump，” at the order of the pilot，I jumped out of the plane following her．___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(二)(2025·福建福州模拟)When I was in high school in the 1980s，Jane Fonda's workout tapes were so popular that even our gym teacher showed us workouts from her program．But in those days，I was far from a person enjoying the workout．My lack of athleticism finally caught up with me after I put on a lot of weight．By the time I was forty-five，I was 252 pounds．Even at six feet tall，that was too much weight for my body．I also felt like life was passing me by，but I didn't know what was next for me or how to get out of the boredom．So when I had the opportunity to enter a contest to meet Jane Fonda through a SiriusXM Town Hall event，I crossed my fingers and entered the sweepstakes (抽奖活动)．To my great surprise，I was one of the winners．I thought this was a sign that my luck was changing．I had always enjoyed Fonda's movies and was excited to have the chance to meet her．So I put on my best clothes，and brought my best friend Jenny along to meet the famous Jane Fonda．Fonda was seventy-five then and looked great in person，wearing all black and looking decades younger．Not only that，but she was so kind and friendly．She really made me feel special as we discussed a film I had recently seen her in called Peace，Love & Misunderstanding．We posed for a photo together，and I even got the opportunity to ask her a question at the event．One of the radio network's organizers promised to send me the photo of us，so I was excited when I received an email from Fonda the next day with the subject line saying that the photo was attached．注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。But my excitement turned to embarrassment when I got a look at the photo．___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Without hesitation，I made a resolution to lose weight and get in shape．___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第三讲 生活故事类应用模拟练·提能力(一)【参考范文】One day，I went to the dining hall and saw her sitting in a_corner，sad and alone．I sat beside her without saying a word at the beginning．“I want to skydive but the pilot said I was too old，” she said sadly，looking up at me．I pushed my cell phone to her which said a 103 year old woman from Sweden jumped from a plane in May 2022 as the oldest person to skydive，saying “There is no question that you could handle it．But anyway，it is up to you．” “If she could do it，I can too，” she said with a determined look．“We shall jump together，” I held her hands tightly．“Jump，”at the order of the pilot，I jumped out of the plane following her．We immediately embraced the freedom of soaring through the air．Seen from the 13，500 feet high sky，the long river looked like a small line．We were falling towards the grassy land when suddenly her parachute was released before me，like a flower．I opened mine too．After circling in the air for about seven minutes，we landed on the ground one after another．“Age is just a number，” she said proudly．“I am really expecting to come skydiving with you next year．”【语篇解读】 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在布鲁克代尔湖老年生活中心遇到了104岁的Hoffner女士，Hoffner女士热爱运动，喜欢保持活跃，经常与别人分享她的糖果，还与作者经常在一起吃晚饭。就在一天晚上他们一起吃饭时，作者不经意说到了去渥太华跳伞，Hoffner女士便决定与作者一起去跳伞，并开始制定训练计划，积极准备去跳伞的故事。【写作指导】1．段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“有一天，我去食堂，看见她坐在一个角落里，悲伤而孤独。”可知，第一段可描写Hoffner女士为什么悲伤，以及作者如何让Hoffner女士与作者一起去跳伞的。②由第二段首句内容“‘跳’，在飞行员的指示下，我跳出了飞机，跟随在她后面。”可知，第二段可描写作者和Hoffner女士去跳伞的整个过程以及感受。2．续写线索：Hoffner女士悲伤——作者劝说——决定一起去跳伞——跳伞的过程——期待下一次跳伞3．词汇激活行为类：①坐下：sat/be seated②应对，处理：handle/deal with③抓住：hold/grasp情绪类：①伤心：sadly/sorrowfully②自豪：proudly/with pride4．佳句点睛①Seen from the 13，500 feet high sky，the long river looked like a small line．(运用了过去分词短语作状语)②We were falling towards the grassy land when suddenly her parachute was released before me，like a flower．(运用了固定句型“be doing...when...”，表示一件事情正在发生，突然发生了另外一件事)(二)【参考范文】But my excitement turned to embarrassment when I_got a_look at the photo．In the photo，I was literally twice Fonda's size even though I looked my very best that day．She was thirty years older than me，but she looked better than me．I was so overwhelmed by sadness that I shared my feelings with Jenny on the phone．But she comforted me，“Hey，it's just a photo．Anybody would pale in comparison to a movie star．” I knew I couldn't be as beautiful as Fonda，of course，but the photo was the wake up call I needed．I had to make a change．Without hesitation，I made a_resolution to lose weight and get in shape．I recalled Jane Fonda's workout program，so I found her workout tapes and followed her exercises．Like her，I started my fitness journey with gentle walks around my neighborhood，building up my endurance and speed．As I got more confident，I worked my way up to walking five kilometers，running road races and even marathons．Eventually，my efforts paid off and led me to lose 85 pounds．Thanks to my photo with Jane Fonda，I was on the path to a healthier and fitter me．【语篇解读】 本文以作者与简·方达的相遇为线索展开，讲述了作者原本不热爱运动且体重超标，在一次抽奖活动中幸运获得与简·方达见面的机会。见面后收到参与活动时拍的合照，因照片中自己与简·方达的体型对比而决定改变，开始减肥塑形的故事。【写作指导】1．段落续写：①由第一段首句内容 “但是当我看到照片时，我的兴奋变成了尴尬。” 可知，第一段可描写作者看到照片后因自己与简·方达体型差异巨大而感到难过，在朋友安慰后，决心作出改变。②由第二段首句内容“我毫不犹豫地决定减肥并塑形。”可知，第二段可描写作者具体的减肥行动，包括借鉴简·方达的锻炼方式，最终减肥成功。2．续写线索：看到照片——体型对比尴尬——朋友安慰——决定改变——采取行动——减肥成功3．词汇激活行为类：①分享感受：share one's feelings/express one's feelings②安慰：comfort/console③回忆：recall/evoke情绪类：①难过：sadness/sorrow②自信的：be confident/be self assured4．佳句点睛①In the photo，I was literally twice Fonda's size even though I looked my very best that day．(运用了even though 引导的让步状语从句)②As I got more confident，I worked my way up to walking five kilometers，running road races and even marathons．(运用了as引导的时间状语从句以及动词 ing形式短语作状语)(共49张PPT)专题六 读后续写第三讲 生活故事类第一部分 题型突破典例 做真题·悟考法(2025·浙江1月卷)Kevin was pretty bored．His mother was at work，and his father had been away on business．Therefore，he was left in the care of Mrs．Hill，an old lady who lived next door．His parents had raised the 12-year-old to be a good boy．He never got into trouble，though sometimes he wanted to do risky things．Mrs．Hill was asleep．Kevin sighed (叹息) and hoped something exciting would happen．Suddenly，a movement outside caught his eye．Mrs．Hill's front window faced Mr．and Mrs．Green's house across the street．The couple had both gone to work，so it was strange that someone was over there．Kevin stared at the man at their front door．Suddenly，the man jumped through an open window into the house．With his heart in his mouth，Kevin grabbed Mrs．Hill's home phone and called the police．Thinking that the man might get away with whatever he wanted before the police arrived，Kevin decided to do something．He rushed out of Mrs．Hill's house and crossed the street quickly．Grabbing a branch from a cut-down tree，he jumped in through the window．“Stop right there！You must leave right now！” he called out，holding the branch with both hands．The man froze for a second，but when he saw the skinny boy he breathed a sigh of relief．“Hey，kid，put that down．It was my home．My parents used to live here and my father's watch was here，” he explained，trying to lift a floorboard．At that moment，the sounds of a police car echoed (回响) in the air．The man stood up in a panic，then ran through the house toward the window and jumped out．Kevin followed out and told the arriving police officers what had happened．They pursued and arrested the man．Kevin went back to Mrs．Hill's house．Somehow he wasn't sure he had done the right thing．“What if he has told the truth？”he thought to himself．The man's words sounded pretty convincing．注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。When Mr．and Mrs．Green got home，Kevin went to talk to them．_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Kevin and Mr．Green took the watch they had found to the police station． ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________一、教你读文1．通过下表理清信息点Characters Kevin，Mrs．Hill，Mr．and Mrs．Green，the intruder(入侵者)，police officersWhen/Where During the day when Kevin was left in Mrs．Hill's care，at Mrs．Hill's and the Greens' houses．Conflict/ Problem Kevin noticed a stranger breaking into the Greens' house and had to decide whether to intervene(干预)，despite his uncertainty about the man's intentions．Main idea Kevin acted bravely to stop a potential burglary (入室盗窃) but later questioned his decision when the intruder claimed to have a legitimate (合情合理的) reason for being there．Theme Courage，moral dilemma，responsibility，and the complexity of judging others' actions．2．梳理“两情”线二、教你构思1．细读首句，巧妙构思2．捕捉伏笔，注重照应原文伏笔语言 续写部分衔接设置第二段the man jumped through an open window 续写通过“pried up the loose floorboard”重现案发现场细节第四段my father's watch was here 续写中“antique watch”和“initials ‘J.R．’”验证手表真实性原文伏笔语言 续写部分衔接设置第六段Somehow he wasn't sure he had done the right thing 续写“Kevin finally relaxed”完成心理转变的闭环第五段They pursued and arrested the man 续写“shaking Kevin's hand...solved a cold case”延伸案件结果第二段Mrs．Hill's front window faced Mr．and Mrs．Green's house 续写保持空间一致性，仍在Green家展开调查三、教你出彩When Mr．and Mrs．Green got home，Kevin went to talk to them．With a nervous voice (用介词短语作状语)，he explained what had happened and the man's claim about the watch．To his surprise (用介词短语作状语表达情感)，Mr．Green's face darkened．“That's impossible，” he said．“We've lived here for 20 years，and the previous owners moved overseas．There's no watch hidden here (用过去分词短语作后置定语)．” Mrs．Green added gently (用副词表达情感动作)，“But let's check the floorboard he mentioned，just to be sure．” Together，they pried up the loose floorboard near the window．Dust flew as (用as引导的时间状语从句表示两个动作同时发生) Kevin spotted a small metal box．Inside lay an antique watch．(用倒装句表示强调)Kevin and Mr．Green took the watch they had found to the police station．The officer examined it immediately，which was engraved with the initials “J．R．”(用定语从句丰富句式)—not the thief's father's name，but (用连词not...but...表示并列转折) a stolen heirloom from a burglary years ago! “This was reported missing in 2010，” he said，shaking Kevin's hand(用非谓语动词短语，表示动作同时发生)．“You've solved a cold case！” As they left (用as引导的时间状语从句)，Mr．Green smiled．“You didn't just stop a crime，Kevin—you uncovered the truth．” Kevin finally relaxed．Justice，he realized(使用插入语，突出强调前面的主语“Justice”)，wasn't just about bravery—it was about seeking answers．应用 模拟练·提能力(一)(2025·河南郑州模拟)In 2017 I graduated from a medical school and started to train the seniors for recovery as a therapist in the Brookdale Lake Senior Living Center where I met Hoffner，who had lived there for roughly the past decade，for the first time．Hoffner，a lady of 104 years old now，grew up in Chicago and worked as a telephone operator for Bell Company for more than four decades．She never married or had children，but she enjoyed beach vacations and driving her small blue car touring all over the country．She loved sports and was kind to everyone she met．She watched every Chicago Cubs game on a TV in her room and also enjoyed watching “MASH” runs．She stayed active，walking several blocks to the grocery store multiple times a week and going on walks to have a look at the neighbor's dogs．She was known for carrying candies—Heath bars，Reese's Peanut Butter Cups and dark chocolate—in her walker．She shared her candies with everyone she met，but she always kept some for me．I remembered that afternoon I and one of my patients were figuring out when the meal was served when Hoffner invited us to eat supper with her in the dining area．Since then，we three ate dinner together almost every night and Hoffner started calling me grandson．One night two months ago，I carelessly told Hoffner over dinner that I was going skydiving in Ottawa．When Hoffner said she wanted to go，too，I thought she meant as an observer．“No，no，no，I want to jump out of a plane，” Hoffner said．My heart sank because I knew clearly what it meant to jump from an airplane at about 13，500 feet high．It might injure her．But she made up her mind and started to do everything to prepare for it．She went to the doctor to have a check and asked me to make a training plan．With her walker she kept training every day．注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。One day，I went to the dining hall and saw her sitting in a corner，sad and alone． ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“Jump，” at the order of the pilot，I jumped out of the plane following her．__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】One day，I went to the dining hall and saw her sitting in a corner，sad and alone．I sat beside her without saying a word at the beginning．“I want to skydive but the pilot said I was too old，” she said sadly，looking up at me．I pushed my cell phone to her which said a 103-year-old woman from Sweden jumped from a plane in May 2022 as the oldest person to skydive，saying “There is no question that you could handle it．But anyway，it is up to you．” “If she could do it，I can too，” she said with a determined look．“We shall jump together，” I held her hands tightly．“Jump，”at the order of the pilot，I jumped out of the plane following her．We immediately embraced the freedom of soaring through the air．Seen from the 13，500 feet high sky，the long river looked like a small line．We were falling towards the grassy land when suddenly her parachute was released before me，like a flower．I opened mine too．After circling in the air for about seven minutes，we landed on the ground one after another．“Age is just a number，” she said proudly．“I am really expecting to come skydiving with you next year．”【语篇解读】 本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在布鲁克代尔湖老年生活中心遇到了104岁的Hoffner女士，Hoffner女士热爱运动，喜欢保持活跃，经常与别人分享她的糖果，还与作者经常在一起吃晚饭。就在一天晚上他们一起吃饭时，作者不经意说到了去渥太华跳伞，Hoffner女士便决定与作者一起去跳伞，并开始制定训练计划，积极准备去跳伞的故事。【写作指导】1．段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“有一天，我去食堂，看见她坐在一个角落里，悲伤而孤独。”可知，第一段可描写Hoffner女士为什么悲伤，以及作者如何让Hoffner女士与作者一起去跳伞的。②由第二段首句内容“‘跳’，在飞行员的指示下，我跳出了飞机，跟随在她后面。”可知，第二段可描写作者和Hoffner女士去跳伞的整个过程以及感受。2．续写线索：Hoffner女士悲伤——作者劝说——决定一起去跳伞——跳伞的过程——期待下一次跳伞3．词汇激活行为类：①坐下：sat/be seated②应对，处理：handle/deal with③抓住：hold/grasp情绪类：①伤心：sadly/sorrowfully②自豪：proudly/with pride4．佳句点睛①Seen from the 13，500 feet high sky，the long river looked like a small line．(运用了过去分词短语作状语)②We were falling towards the grassy land when suddenly her parachute was released before me，like a flower．(运用了固定句型“be doing...when...”，表示一件事情正在发生，突然发生了另外一件事)(二)(2025·福建福州模拟)When I was in high school in the 1980s，Jane Fonda's workout tapes were so popular that even our gym teacher showed us workouts from her program．But in those days，I was far from a person enjoying the workout．My lack of athleticism finally caught up with me after I put on a lot of weight．By the time I was forty-five，I was 252 pounds．Even at six feet tall，that was too much weight for my body．I also felt like life was passing me by，but I didn't know what was next for me or how to get out of the boredom．So when I had the opportunity to enter a contest to meet Jane Fonda through a SiriusXM Town Hall event，I crossed my fingers and entered the sweepstakes (抽奖活动)．To my great surprise，I was one of the winners．I thought this was a sign that my luck was changing．I had always enjoyed Fonda's movies and was excited to have the chance to meet her．So I put on my best clothes，and brought my best friend Jenny along to meet the famous Jane Fonda．Fonda was seventy-five then and looked great in person，wearing all black and looking decades younger．Not only that，but she was so kind and friendly．She really made me feel special as we discussed a film I had recently seen her in called Peace，Love & Misunderstanding．We posed for a photo together，and I even got the opportunity to ask her a question at the event．One of the radio network's organizers promised to send me the photo of us，so I was excited when I received an email from Fonda the next day with the subject line saying that the photo was attached．注意：1．续写词数应为150左右；2．请按如下格式作答。But my excitement turned to embarrassment when I got a look at the photo．_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Without hesitation，I made a resolution to lose weight and get in shape．________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】But my excitement turned to embarrassment when I got a look at the photo．In the photo，I was literally twice Fonda's size even though I looked my very best that day．She was thirty years older than me，but she looked better than me．I was so overwhelmed by sadness that I shared my feelings with Jenny on the phone．But she comforted me，“Hey，it's just a photo．Anybody would pale in comparison to a movie star．” I knew I couldn't be as beautiful as Fonda，of course，but the photo was the wake-up call I needed．I had to make a change．Without hesitation，I made a resolution to lose weight and get in shape．I recalled Jane Fonda's workout program，so I found her workout tapes and followed her exercises．Like her，I started my fitness journey with gentle walks around my neighborhood，building up my endurance and speed．As I got more confident，I worked my way up to walking five kilometers，running road races and even marathons．Eventually，my efforts paid off and led me to lose 85 pounds．Thanks to my photo with Jane Fonda，I was on the path to a healthier and fitter me．【语篇解读】 本文以作者与简·方达的相遇为线索展开，讲述了作者原本不热爱运动且体重超标，在一次抽奖活动中幸运获得与简·方达见面的机会。见面后收到参与活动时拍的合照，因照片中自己与简·方达的体型对比而决定改变，开始减肥塑形的故事。【写作指导】1．段落续写：①由第一段首句内容“但是当我看到照片时，我的兴奋变成了尴尬。”可知，第一段可描写作者看到照片后因自己与简·方达体型差异巨大而感到难过，在朋友安慰后，决心作出改变。②由第二段首句内容“我毫不犹豫地决定减肥并塑形。”可知，第二段可描写作者具体的减肥行动，包括借鉴简·方达的锻炼方式，最终减肥成功。2．续写线索：看到照片——体型对比尴尬——朋友安慰——决定改变——采取行动——减肥成功3．词汇激活行为类：①分享感受：share one's feelings/express one's feelings②安慰：comfort/console③回忆：recall/evoke情绪类：①难过：sadness/sorrow②自信的：be confident/be self-assured4．佳句点睛①In the photo，I was literally twice Fonda's size even though I looked my very best that day．(运用了even though 引导的让步状语从句)②As I got more confident，I worked my way up to walking five kilometers，running road races and even marathons．(运用了as引导的时间状语从句以及动词-ing形式短语作状语)谢 谢！ 展开更多...... 收起↑ 资源预览 当前文档不提供在线查看服务，请下载使用！
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